Monday, September 23, 2013

School Year (Rough Draft)

Here's a poem I just wrote! This is only a rough draft, so bear with me here.

School Year

New clothes, books, and grades
Oh how I love today!
School rushes
Days passing
Bringing us to winter.

Oh winter! Cold winter
Bright and sharp
Numbing our toes
But never our brains.
School rushes
Days passing
Brings us to spring rains.

Lunch we eat inside
Munch! We play outside
And get wet.
Oh rain, lovely rain
Drizzling down our faces
Oh rain, chilling rain
Running off the leaveses.
School rushes
Days passing
Brings us to the play.

Oh play! Quick play
Actors singing, dancing
Oh play! Quick play
And then the final bows.
School rushes
Days passing
brings us into summer.

Oh summer! Hot summer
With its sweltering heat
Oh summer! How summer
Until our friends we greet
As the school year comes again.

And there you have it! Feel free to comment what you think.

3 comments:

  1. This is pretty good. Reminds me of past times in school!

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  2. really good poem!!
    <3
    Lilly Jackson
    http://wildflowersinbloom.com/

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